這次我離開你 是風 是雨 是夜晚，
你笑了笑 我擺一擺手
一條寂寞的路便展向兩頭了
念此際你已回到濱河的家居
想你在梳理長髮或整理濕了的外衣
而我風雨的歸程還正長
山退得很遠 平蕪拓得更大
哎 這世界 怕黑暗已真的成形了......
你說 你真傻 多像那放風箏的孩子
本不該縛它又放它
風箏去了 留一線斷了的錯誤
書太厚了 本不該掀開扉頁的
沙灘太長 本不該走出足印的
雲出自岫谷 泉水滴自石隙
一切都開始了 而海洋在何處？
「獨木橋」的初遇已成往事了
如今又已是廣闊的草原了
我已失去扶持你專寵的權利
紅與白揉藍於晚天 錯得多美麗
而不錯入金果的園林
卻誤入維特的墓地......
這次我離開你 便不再想見你了
念此際你已靜靜入睡
留我們未完的一切 留給這世界
這世界 我仍體切地踏著
而已是你底夢境了.......
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偷偷說：就我私心而言，本詩在意象鍛造上的表現雖較為傳統，然我仍偏愛風、雨、平蕪在此處的運用，尤其欣賞鄭氏在第五節特殊的運鏡方式。熔鑄白話入詩對讀者而言一向可親，但我更喜的是他的音韻之美，若有似無的浪子之風。"一條寂寞的路便展向兩頭了"，下次相見，會是隔山隔海。
2009年1月13日，數人興起，自詡無詩不歡，唯恐文字失寵，此站遂成...
A poem should not mean, but be...
詩人共管
鎮站之詩
Ars Poetica
by Archibald MacLeish
A poem should be palpable and mute
As a globed fruit,
Dumb
As old medallions to the thumb,
Silent as the sleeve-worn stone
Of casement ledges where the moss has grown—
A poem should be wordless
As the flight of birds.
*
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon climbs,
Leaving, as the moon releases
Twig by twig the night-entangled trees,
Leaving, as the moon behind the winter leaves,
Memory by memory the mind—
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon climbs.
*
A poem should be equal to:
Not true.
For all the history of grief
An empty doorway and a maple leaf.
For love
The leaning grasses and two lights above the sea—
A poem should not mean
But be.
by Archibald MacLeish
A poem should be palpable and mute
As a globed fruit,
Dumb
As old medallions to the thumb,
Silent as the sleeve-worn stone
Of casement ledges where the moss has grown—
A poem should be wordless
As the flight of birds.
*
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon climbs,
Leaving, as the moon releases
Twig by twig the night-entangled trees,
Leaving, as the moon behind the winter leaves,
Memory by memory the mind—
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon climbs.
*
A poem should be equal to:
Not true.
For all the history of grief
An empty doorway and a maple leaf.
For love
The leaning grasses and two lights above the sea—
A poem should not mean
But be.
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Dear 路過詩友：
回覆刪除此詩誠為首選，補遺感佩！
Alvin
我是Megan啦XD
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